Presentation 1 Feedback

My feedback from presentation 1 was that my Waterlilies paining was really good and that this was an interesting style to pursue. I was told it had kind of a Renaissance feel and that there was a gap in the market for that kind of artwork.

I was told that I was focusing on too many avenues of research 3D, Traditional, Digital, Narrative and that I needed to pick one/narrow down my options. I d agree with this, but as this was my first presentation I was just trying to express how I'd looked into different medias to see which one would be the most interesting to research and create in.

As I still am not entirely sure what  want my vision statement to be, I'm going to continue working on my waterlilies painting, and other illustrations that I'm creating to see where the research project takes me.