Presentation 2 Feedback

The feedback I got from this presentation was that the ideas for the narrative I had the idea for were a bit cheesy and that my traditional pencil sketches were a more interesting avenue to pursue.

There was no objection to me continuing be adding digital painting into my project, but I was told I was loosing some of the "romance" in my traditional work when converting it to digital.

I was told to look more at my digital linework and how I could use my traditional work to influence this. Line variation, texture ect.

Because of this feedback, I'm planning on scrapping my narrative idea for now and focuing more on the work I'd began before that. I am going to research into more traditional techniques and see how I can apply them to my own work. I also want to look at ways to combine digital and traditional artistic techniques.